Book Report – February 2018

It’s that time again: the time I report back on my latest reads and give you my brief review of each book as I inch my way toward my yearly goal.


For February I read a romantic novel for a review club I belong to, a high-fantasy novel from the 80s, and a non-fiction work on plotting and outlining a novel.

This edition brings a new feature I’ve decided to add, called “What I Learned.” As the all-wise Stephen King dictated, “If you don’t have time to read, you don’t have the time (or the tools) to write.” (One of many, many pearls from On Writing: 10th Anniversary Edition: A Memoir of the Craft.) Part of the aim of my reading goal is to improve my writing skills–in addition to expanding my worldview and having adventures. Every book, even the worst ones I have read, has taught me something–about life and about writing. That’s what is so great about a book: it’s teaching disguised as entertainment. Like orange-flavored cold medicine.

In light of that, I will share with you the golden nugget I extracted from each of these figurative mines. Sometimes I benefited from seeing the pitfalls the author fell into, getting a lesson in what not to do. Other times I gleaned from observing a master at work at his craft and managed to pick up something from watching them, always with the hope of putting it into practice in my own pieces.

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Yesterday: A Novel of Reincarnation, by Samyann

In Short: romantic, contemporary and historical (lemme ‘splain below)
Warnings: steamy scenes
Who Should Read: romance readers who like rich historical stories

I read Yesterday as an assignment for a book review group I joined, where you get free e-books in exchange for an honest review. (I’ll talk about this group in a later post, when I have more experience with the company to give you a good idea of what you can expect, should you be interested in signing up).

This was an exciting and engaging story about love transcending time. When Amanda (great name for a character–maaayyy have been a factor in my choosing this book) rescues Mark from the scene of an accident, they both get the feeling they have met before. Their love story is told through a combination of present-day interactions and historical flashbacks.

The flashbacks were my favorite parts. They reminded me a good deal of Gone with the Wind, as they were set in the Civil War and the male lead came across very Rhett Butler-esque. The heroine is painted as a strong-minded woman, although there are times when Mark borders on the macho, and their relationship sometimes comes across as codependent, a view not assisted by their being together for nearly every scene, despite their supposedly being responsible adults with important jobs. It’s no worse (or better) than Twilight, though, and I found the book to be very enjoyable, with just a smattering of minor errors I felt compelled to share in the review I gave it.

What I Learned: Pacing is important. There were times I wanted a break from having Amanda and Mark together, just to give them–and me–some breathing room. Their present-day story felt compacted and rushed. I also noticed a few instances where conversations did not progress organically: People would make remarks or have mood swings out of left-field. As tempting as it is to push characters into the directions we want, writers instead need to be careful to lead them where we want them to go, lest we risk pushing the reader away.

Daggerspell (Deverry Series, Book One), by Katharine Kerr

In Short: fantasy, adventure, magic
Warnings: lots of strange names for people and places; jumps around in time
Who Should Read: 80s-style high-fantasy readers, people who enjoyed Wonder Woman for all the kickass ladies, Game of Thrones fans

Full disclosure: I bought this book at McKay’s Used Books because I was looking to expand my experience of fantasy books for an upcoming project and because the book was $.10. That’s right: ten cents.

The story’s basis is a love triangle that ends tragically, resulting in one of the lovers’ having to live on for centuries in order to try to right the situation when the other lovers are reincarnated. The book is narrated by the cursed lover but is really the story of the woman whose wyrd, or destiny, he must make right.

It doesn’t sound like much of an endorsement, but this book was worth every penny. Yes, all ten of them. It was exciting, with an impressive female lead and an intriguing premise. I’m surprised I haven’t heard of this author or series before, because the book is very well done and part of a series. (What self-respecting fantasy book isn’t?) Kerr deserves kudos for her contributions to the genre.

The only drawback was a common issue I run into with high-fantasy novels: the language. Not curse words. I mean the usual nouns: people, places, and things. There is a pronunciation guide at the beginning that explains a lot (essentially, the author used Welsh as a basis), but it’s not only the issue of the mental gymnastics of trying to pronounce a name in your head; it’s that there are several people who have 3 incarnations, with a different name each time, and I had a little difficulty remembering who each was and when each existed. Not in such a way that it detracted from the reading itself, only insofar as I wanted to read into the author’s intent and make predictions. It wasn’t until I was finished that I found the chart in the back that lines them all up for you. If you start getting lost, just consult that page. Problem: solved.

Side Note: It seems to me George R. R. Martin must have read these books before he wrote the Game of Thrones series because there are several things that struck me as similar, not the least of which was a family of people with white-blond hair and a penchant for incest, and love triangles that echo throughout generations. (By the way, seeing a theme this month?) I don’t see nearly enough similarities to say Martin stole anything from Kerr, just enough to get the feeling that this could have been a influential book for him–whether consciously or otherwise I could not say.

What I Learned: It always amazes me that stories needn’t be told linearly. This book jumps around in time, beginning with the past of the present time (the main character’s childhood), then to her first incarnation, back to her adolescence, then again to her second incarnation, and back again to her as an adult. by “touching base” this way, the author made sure I understood who this was really about, kept her fresh in my mind, and at the same time got me to care what happened to her, no matter which incarnation she was in. With a story like this it can be tricky to know where to begin, but I think Kerr ordered the events in a logical, if not chronological, fashion.

Take Off Your Pants!: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing: Revised Edition, by Libbie Hawker

In Short: writing advice, plotting, outlining
Warnings: large type (fewer words), sometimes belabors a point, Lolita spoilers
Who Should Read: writers looking for a useful outline format

First, the title. If you’re not familiar with the concept of pantsing–in the literary sense of the word–you most likely are wondering what on earth the removal of one’s pants has to do with writing. Briefly, then: pantsing vs. plotting is an argument writers get into about whether it’s better to make it up as we go (or, “by the seat of our pants”), or outline the bones before we get to the business of putting words on paper (or, “plot,” much as one would chart a course on a map). For those who are curious, I do both but would like to do a little more plotting, to save myself time in the future. Hence, my interest in this book.

I had this on my Wish List, and my dear friends were kind enough to send it to me for Christmas. (Thanks so much, Cassie and Gary!) I’m always looking for new ways to organize my thoughts in writing, and I found the plotting method in this book to be extremely simple and useful. I used it to check the structure of my work-in-progress, make sure I was telling a coherent story. So much happens within and around a story that it’s easy for a writer to get lost and forget what they set out to say.


The method outlined in this book is so simple, but very effective. It reminded me a lot of Blake Snyder’s Save The Cat! The Last Book on Screenwriting You’ll Ever Need “beat sheet.” (That book is basically the New Testament for screenwriters, second only to Syd Field’s Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting.) It really helped me narrow my focus in my narrative. I am good at a lot of things, but picking out my theme and sticking to it is not one of them. Yet. But a tight-knit, fat-free plot goes a long way toward making a story successful–in a literary, not a financial sense–and I want to tell the best possible story I can, so anything that helps with that is very much appreciated.

Note about my warning: Hawker uses examples from various books, most particularly Charlotte’s Web and Lolita. (How often do you see those two works listed side-by-side?) In the course of using them, she gives away much of the plot, so if you’re really set on reading them, you may want to be careful or go ahead and get that out of the way before you read this.

What I Learned: I learned a very easy method for shaping my novels. Do I think it improved the time it takes me to write a novel? Hard to say until I go to write the next one. Likely, yes. Do I think I could write a novel in six weeks, as the author did? Doubtful, but with hard work and lots of practice, perhaps I could churn one out in 6 months. I’ve been working on my current novel for several years now, so anything is an improvement.

For more book reviews and recommendations, see Book Report – January 2018 and Fave Reads from 2017.


9 thoughts on “Book Report – February 2018

  1. This is fabulous! I opened it thinking I’d be adding to my TBR list, then didn’t, but was quite amused in the process. I’m struggling with books that jump around in time right now (All the Light We Cannot See started it) and I just don’t wanna now. I almost gave up on Lilac Girls because it rotates between three characters in three countries (I’m taking it slow, so we’ll see how this goes).

    I’m curious about this fantasy project you mentioned, as that seems to be my main genres these days (both YA and middle grade), along with some historical fiction. What are you ready to share about it?

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    1. I just bought a copy of All the Light at Goodwill about a month ago! Guess I’ll have to move it up in the TBR queue. LOL

      Ghat surprises me. I totally thought Stage Kiss would be right up your alley. I enjoyed it immensely, despite its editing needs.

      The fantasy project is a work that began as a dream in high school, then became a short piece I tried to get a scholarship with (hello, FastWeb LOL), then sat in a filing cabinet forever. I pulled it out a few years ago to try my hand at it again and made some progress on it, but it was lacking something I couldn’t name, so it stalled. Then I had ANOTHER DREAM that had NOTHING to do with it, but that somehow reminded me of it and I soon realized completely added a whole new aspect that made me excited about it again. So, I fleshed it out into a one-page synopsis and have been tucking away ideas for it while researching. I have not been a big reader of fantasy, so I am happy to hear any recommendations. The story is high-fantasy, with a vaguely Middle Ages vibe. It’s somewhat allegorical, as I’m using it to channel a lot of my political frustrations. It’s a weighty work in that sense, but I’m trying to balance that by having a terrific romance and lots of adventure. Not exactly lighthearted stuff, but not thoroughly dark. Think, maybe, Legend-esque. The early Tom Cruise movie. But a little less silly and sadly bereft of Tim Curry. LOL 😄


      1. All the Light is SO well written. I stopped a few times just to bask in the writing. However, I frequently stopped at the beginning of a chapter to review what year it was in the table of contents. Two characters, “present” day, plus reviewing the previous ten years, it was a lot and SO worth it! Oh, and I (accidentally) followed it with Women in the Castle which was a nice pairing, even if they were two heavy books in a row.
        Stage Kiss by Lorson? I’ll give it a try if my library has it. But in need of editing…oh AMil!

        My two current favorite fantasy authors are Tamora Pierce and Sarah J. Maas. Pierce (who inspired Maas) writes for middle grades in quartets mostly and has two fantasy worlds she writes in, which makes it like a series, but not because each set has a different main character, but previous characters are around. Start with the song of the lioness quartet, which is her first from the 80s (feudal society with magic, girl wants to become a knight, can’t because she’s a girl, has an idea about how to make it happen, and four books ensue). Maas is YA fantasy and has two series going right now and I’ve read everything she’s published to date. They are page turners and you may lose sleep. All I knew when I started A Court of Thorns and Roses is it was well written and she’s great at world building, and wow is that the case. That is the first of a trilogy (following the dramatic trilogy formula, so be warned) and the connecting novella (to another trilogy I think) comes out in May. Her Throne of Glass series is also amazing, but I’d recommend waiting until it’s complete to start it. There are six books plus a prequel set of 5 novellas, and I’m not sure how many there will be. The next is out in October, and I’d be surprised if it’s the last based on where the big arc is now. Both Pierce and Maas seem to have a lot to say about society and culture if you want to dig into the stories, so they may be good research. I’m happy to chat more as I adore these authors, but this may already be too much!

        Recently I’ve also read Everless and Sabaa Tahir’s two books. Both are pieces of series with the rest in progress, but were really enjoyable. I’m reserving more judgement until the series are complete.

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      2. Re: Stage Kiss comment—IKR?! Haha, that’s how I knew I was into the story.

        Thanks for the awesome recommendations! I pulled them up on my library’s website. They have lots by both, but they’re missing the first of the Pierce series. They do, however, have the Maas series, so I am super stoked about getting that now. Sounds great! ❤


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